Second draft

 Hey blog, 

Let's talk second draft. Today we met at a starbucks and wrote SOOO much. We have our perfect ending, and my next blog will expand on it. But here is our final structure. I will be working on the script this week!

Draft 2- 

FIRST SCENE: CALL WITH FRIENDS

-Begins with Diego playing video games- computer is essential, headset. 

-bantering- establishes the way he talks to people and who his friends are. 

- Receives a text from ex- 

Medium paragraph apologizing- hoping for the best. 

-He stares at it kinda sad. 

-”Yo are you there” 

“My fucking ex dude, she’s texting me.” 

“Little whore”

“Yo how do you feel now that you're not getting pussy.”

“Yo im gonna hop off-” 

SECOND SCENE: CALL WITH MOTHER

Call with his mom

-mom call him

-how are you-mom

-My girlfriend broke up with me

-Your dad stopped sending money

- dementia/ not there. Is that it, is that why you called me.

-hangs up, fucking bitch. 

THIRD SCENE: MONKEY SEQUENCE

-He opens pornhub 

-scrolls

-Cant get hard

-finds brochure/calendar of monkey

-stupid ass montage

FOURTH SCENE: THE TWEET

• Transition- j-cut, implied orgasm. 

• On discord w friends. 

• Friends pauses game.

• He stares at monkey

• Makes tweet. 

• Friends come back

• Playing, silence. 

• Out of nowhere “yo diego, wtf did you just tweet.” 

• Moment of awkwardness- they all start laughing. 

• Feeling of confidence “Like I get it, but like I don’t say it.”

• “Im just speaking fax”

• Nah its pretty funny, I hope it goes viral. 

• Monkeys are just bitches who don’t talk

• That’s so funny, you should post it on TikTok

• For real?

• Fuck yeah dude

FIFTH SCENE: INFLUENCER MOMENT! YAY!

• Cuts to him making a tiktok “ok guys hear me out… the other day i realized monkeys are fully humans that don’t talk so like why isn’t it acceptable that we fuck them?”

• TikTok gains traction, people commenting “LMFAO WTF” “nahh” “BRO HAS THAT ZOO RIZZ” “not the monkey pussy” “why he lowkey speaking faX tho” “not the monkussy” “yo digital footprint is a real thing”

• Makes another Tiktok, stitches a monkey “no really, what’s stopping us”

• Continues to gain followers, comments, mixed reviews but ppl encouraging it

• Fast cuts, making tik toks gaining traction

SIXTH SCENE: EX TEXTS HIM BACK

• Ex texts “hey i saw you were going viral, i just want to make sure you’re okay im here for u”

• Diego makes tiktok “let me tell you about the fucking whore i dated. This bitch broke my heart and as soon as i’m getting clout she texts me back. Fake ass whore.” tiktok gets views wtvr

SEVENTH SCENE: RUNNING INTO EACH OTHER

• Checking tiktok, sees notifs going down. Fuck. 

• Diego?

• Somewhere like grocery store, they run into each other, ex is super mature “look i saw what you were saying about me, i didnt realize you were that hurt. We only went on three dates.” he’s really aggressive, screaming and thinks hes winning this argument but really she is

• “Diego, if you geniunly believe the reason women don’t like you is because of your looks, there is something incredibly wrong with you. You are the most entitled person I know.” 

• “You’re just another whore”

• “Alright Diego. Have a good life.”

• He tries uttering something else but is choked with tears and like shame. 

FINALE

• In the car straight after the grocery store, filming himself “if this video gets one million likes I’ll kill my ex. I’ll fucking do it.” screen goes black and you just hear a bunch of likes/notifs sounds